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Tarik James's avatar

Wow Jeffery. This was great. So many wonderful things about. The timing of the ghost siting was so perfectly placed - It gave me the chills. I also loved the two sub-story or should I say the two simultaneous stories-the relationships, current and previous, and the ghost tour trip. Really well done. I'm looking forward to reading the other parts.

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Thank you @ Tarik James This is one is a little different. Hence the "memoir" tag. Based on a real city and hotel. Some real people and events. The rest is imagination. Not all my stories are close to 30 pages. I guess the average is 9-12 pages. It's hard for me to do smaller works, though not impossible. I've been accused of being "verbose" and having "chatty characters." Oh, well. We are who we are. Why change now?

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Thank you @Vince Roman for the like!

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Thank you @esme for the like! cont;nue

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Thank you @Felicia A. Iyamu and @The Scorched Pages!

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@Ellen Y. Mueller, thank you for the like and restack!!

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Thank you @August Rose Carothers and @Janine Eaby!

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@Liv Ramirez, thank you for the like! cont;nue

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