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Inge Snip's avatar

really enjoying the mood you’re building with this, there’s something gritty and off-kilter that pulls you in. and the pacing works well, it unfolds slowly but keeps a sense of tension going underneath. excited to see where you take it next!

subscribed and following along :)

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Jeffrey Cummins's avatar

@Inge Snip thank you, so much! This is a rather new one for the upcoming collection. It’s based on a real place where I had real experiences and also added some other factual experiences that happened nearby. I appreciate your kind words. Hope the pay off delivers.

Some of the best ghost stories are by the Victorian English writers and it’s all mood and shudder. So, that’s what I’m aiming for: realistic twists on Victorian/Gothic ghost/shudder tales.

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Jeffrey Cummins's avatar

@kimmy creek thank you for the like!

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